Wednesday, November 17, 2010

Leaping Narratives, What's That? N #1

on the 9th of November Miss Davies was teaching us how to write a Narrative. After she told two Narratives that she wrote, she told us to create two characters that are going be in our Narratives. Then she said that we were going to write 3 Narratives. She told us to write down  these things and fill them in:


Name: Matt Daniel's
Age: 12
Gender: Boy
Height: 7 foot 5
Weight: 35 kg
Body Type: Muscular and Sporty
Personality: Vain
Hair: Short, Black
Eye: Turquoise
Clothes: Short Sleeve
Secret: Born with a tail


Name: Monster Munroe
Age: 13
Gender: Boy
Height: 6 foot 4
Weight:36 kg
Body Type: Muscular
Personality: Big mouth and Anger management
Hair: Short, Brown
Eye: Hazel
Clothes: Short Sleeve


This is the story using these characters...


"Matt! wheres you're togs?" "in my room!" "they better cause there not in the wash!" said mum.
"Matt  wheres you're togs? for the 3rd time!" "I cant find them!" "oh well you'll have to wear you're speedo's" said mum

My name is Matt Daniels I'm 12yr's old. I'm tall for my age because I'm 7foot5 and I'm not even in the teen years yet. I've got short black hair and turquoise eyes. I've got an athletic body. Anyway back to the story. "Do I have to!" "yes" "fine" I said. "I just hope that Monster Munroe is away." Oh and Monster Munroe's real name is Michael Munroe. We just call him monster because hes strong and he has anger management.


Once I got to school my class and I had to go to the school pool. Once I got changed we had to go into the pool. To warm up Miss Davies threw little hoops all around the pool then she told us to go and find them. As soon as I went under water I saw a green hoop. As soon as I reached for it I saw Monster Munroe looking at my speedo's. I swam towards him. Just as he was going to say something I punched him right in the guts. That got him real angry and before you knew it we were wrestling under water. Suddenly with amazing strength Miss Davies pulled us out of the water and when she did I did an uppercut to finish the battle. When she saw what I did she told me to meet her in her office. A few minutes later Miss Davies walked through the door way and said "why'd you hit Michael?" "he was going to tell the whole world about my secret" "and what is you're secret?" so I turned around and pulled my t-shirt up and I buried my head in my hands and started crying. When she tapped me on the shoulder I turned around and saw that she had a tail to!         

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